TMI?
I know that the heroes (well, Kickman) are banking on the fact that Succubus loves Kickman and wouldn’t try to put one over on him. And maybe all parties involved in the contract have good intentions. And maybe Grayhawk has a fine eye for detail to catch legal traps… But it is NEVER a good idea to sign a contract prepared by a demon lawyer!
Also, why does demon lawyer not wear pants?
I thought about using the short, big-nosed lawyer that represented Morebucks Coffee during the first Coffee War. I decided against it, but still went with a short, big-nosed demon lawyer.
Thanks to everyone for participating in the Real Superheroines popularity poll. In the early results, the votes are fairly well spread out which is good. I’d like to think that every gal in the cast has a solid fan base. If you haven’t voted yet, the poll will stay up until the end of this month.
??? There are Lawyers who AREN’T Demons? (Required post)
So what are the odds that in the end Angelina takes the Nun path? (I consider this a likely Kickman outcome)
when we lawyers get involved, good intentions aren’t worth that much…
Please tell me Succubus’ name is Lorena…
We already know it’s Angelina.
Sorry, I misspoke, the succubuss’ junk’s name.
I hadn’t thought of a name for it. I thought only guys did that, but I figure a succubus might as well. We can call it Lorena. And not just because my first girlfriend in high school was named Lorena (but with two “E”s).
“You may be prepared for me, hero. But are you prepared to take on me and… LORENA!”
“AAAAAHHHHH!”
Do you know how old you have to be to know who the Bobbitt’s are (were?), and what they’re famous for?
Best to just cut this off now!
I remember. I could have sworn I was still in high school when that happened, but no it was after. Also, the number one song was “That’s the Way Love Goes” By Janet Jackson. https://www.birthdayjams.com/us/1993/06/23/
TFW the entire comment section is more concerned about lawyers than vagina dentata.
You’re making an assumption. There are other, possibly more disturbing, possible locations….
Ask me about those locations and I will deny I typed that, or this!
Okay but someone else explain the locations Geezer’s talking about!
Well She doesn’t cover a lot of area so there’s not that many places to hide some teeth. That said there could be teeth in her anus, where her nipples should be, the back of her head, in her ears, her nostrils, between her toes and fingers. There’s also a small possibility she has a stomach mouth but she keeps it closed so she doesn’t scare her fella.
Okay, earteeth got my imagination whirring. The idea of a secondary bone structure that can be used to adjust/filter aural reception is really interesting.
If there was also an ear tongue to go with the earteeth, you might not need a Q-tip to get at earwax.
I have nothing to add to this entire thread… :o)
I’m still assuming that the conflict for this chapter will be the horde of Succubus’s sexual partners that are pissed about her going monogamous and violently object to the marriage.
I’m going to quietly comment here and give you your Kick Points… (so I don’t forget later). Hopefully no one will read this as I confirm your +5 SPOILER KICK POINTS!
No Spoiler kickpoints for me this time, but I really like your ‘Taint Aura’ mechanic and you’re showing your skill as an author dodging the obvious guesses. I will confess that when I guess spoilers, it’s with the hope that you’ll subvert them with something more interesting and if you don’t, hey, I get Kick Points. You’re showing real skill, but your comic is on the road to Uncanny Valley so you might want to tone the weird and twisted stuff down a couple of notches because you’ll get people ‘nope’ing out. Be careful, okay? You won’t get reader retention by scaring away your readers.
Wow, that’s a surprisingly serious turn from demon lawyers and butt teeth. I should also mention that I love the comic and the kick point system. It makes me feel proud of my intelligence, y’know.
Doom Patrol had carnivorous butt monsters!
I promise that Kickman will never turn as weird as the Doom Patrol series.
The comments section, on the other hand…
It was a team effort. We should all be proud.